50 Story Word Competition
The 50 word story competition has been running for a number of years now at Aurora College. This year, we had over 80 entries across the 5 categories.
Writing a 50 word story is harder than it may seem and the judges and I had much discussion about who to award the prizes too. This year’s winners will have their stories published not only in the Aurora College Year Book, The Bright Lights, but also the Land Newspaper. They also received prizes from Buy From the Bush, and book vouchers from Booktopia, as well as hats, bags, lunch boxes and stationary! These prizes were awarded at the Residential School assembly.
Junior division (Years 5 & 6)
1st place: A mistake and Guilt
Guilt follows me everywhere I go, dragging its heavy footsteps behind me. It comes happy as ever when I’m facing the hardest times, nudging me on the shoulder. It scrapes at my door, leaving me awake in the darkness of the night. Why did I name my dog guilt.
Clementine Campbell
Year 6 - Robertson
2nd place: The Hedge
It stood. Encircling the old house. A leafy, rectangular hedge, that had been there since the beginning of time. This was in the past. Now, it’s gone. A bare dirt ring marks where it was. Through the dirt lies tens of footballs, soccer balls, rugby balls from the adjacent fields
Edward Byles
Year 6 - Albury
Middle division (Years 7-9)
1st place: An Old Man’s Wrinkles
Life lines his eyes,
rolling down his cheeks and crimping at his mouth.
Rivers of past smiles,
Lines showing deepest regrets.
A map of battles lost and won.
A canvas of a long life lived.
His past on full display,
To those who care to look.
Chloe Ward
Year 8 - Bowral
2nd place: Beast Escape
Crack! Smash! The silvery sphere is breaking; the monstrous creature inside breaking free. It smashes against its cage. A terrible cawing screech fills the air as the thing finally pushes itself out into the open air. Its slimy wings spray liquid at the little ants below. A bird is born.
Elizabeth Butcherine
Year 8 - Dubbo
Senior division (Years 10-12)
1st place: Childhood promise
To many, it was only a child’s promise, to be forgotten with the changing seasons. At first, I myself believed that, thinking this friendship would not last. So to be standing here, in a beautiful white gown, with you before me as we finally came together. Forever united as one.
Sariann Andrews
Year 10 - Walcha
2nd place: Lamenting Smoke
“There’s nothing I can do for you.” I leave the clinic, my son knows to wait outside until I finish my smoke. "C’mon Oliver." My voice is hoarse. How did I fail him? 9 years later, I’m begging my son to take the same advice that was given to me.
Gwen Rumbel
Year 11 - Dungog
Teacher division
1st place: The Decision
The old man glances around, then bat down, faces the bowler. A quick delivery, and thud! Shouts of ‘howzat’, and all eyes are on me. Slowly, my finger points high. Jubilant cheers fill the air as the saddened old man trudges past me. I whisper, just for him, ‘Sorry Dad.’
Scott Preskett
Sydney – Mathematics Teacher
2nd place: New England Summer
After the frost froze the banks of the Aspley, after jonquils appeared in butternut sunset at the vicarage, only then then were we gifted a few weeks of cicada screeching summer. Sunlight on water when Coog opened the public pool- chlorine stinging, stars majestic, bindis biting, walking dripping wet-home.
Jowen Hillyer
Black Head – English Teacher
Parent division
1st place: Hooked
The evening magic, when the surface boils with the emerging nymphs taking wing. Beneath lurks the insatiable hunger, locked on to its next meal. Unchecked acceleration, bursting through the surface, swallowing its prey. A terrible mistake, realised too late, as the angler strikes and smiles.
Andrew Coombe - Barrington
2nd place: Fifty words
Fifty words (give or take ten percent).
Is that a lot of words or too few?
Only thirty-four left, now thirty if we’re being pedantic.
Two dozen words, if only they were bakers dozens.
Thirteen words, an actual bakers dozen.
That’s worrying.
Once upon a time….
Mat Campbell - Robertson